CRank: 5Score: 110

Some guy posted a link to this in my vision; I did this for fun:
>first line - misused comma
>"Ya" is not a word
>started a sentence with "but"
>another misused comma in the first paragraph
>misused comma in the first line of the second paragraph
>quotation mark fail in second paragraph
>misused comma - first line, paragraph 3
>Should be a comma before and after "hey"
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